Task 2 Creative Writing Practice

As I lifted my head to the sky, the clouds filled my vision. The light sky that I had just seen moment ago had become the past and moved on. What made up the sky now was a dull blue colour like the ocean. But this was much more creative. In some areas the purple colours of the sky had dominated the blue and white clouds same with the couple yellow patches on the left side of the tree blocking my vision. I stared further into the distance where the clear sky had been in control for most of the day. The sun projected its bright rays onto the white clouds creating puffy balls of light. The air in the sky felt cool again from the heavy rain just a day ago. The moisture in the sky once the sun fell felt recovering and needed from the harsh heat the sun gave out today. The shrubs close by were baked by the sun and the red sand has been collected in different areas as the wind blows.

• Vocabulary is sometimes repetitive or has a very similar meanings - Word choice is also slightly bland.
• I used the 5 senses (but could focus on slightly more by focusing on one other than visuals)