Dropping a Reader into the Story

The Unexpected Trade

• Starting the story with a key conversation

"He told me he would be here 15 minutes ago" Albert said
"Did you give the right warehouse" said Dean
"Yes and its the only abandoned one in this port area" Albert said

At this instant a car rev crescendoed and entered through the corner entrance of the large and empty warehouse. As the car entered the warehouse, the sound projected through the ginormous echoing building. While the car got closer and closer, the black sports car increased its speed until it was only a hundred meters away. Albert and Dean stood next to each other on edge with the speed the car was gaining after each second went past. Suddenly the driver in the car puled the handbrake and turned the wheel away from the two stood in the open. As the car drifted closer and closer at its side, the person in the car couldn't be seen with the black tinted windows the front and rear windows had. The car was only 20 meters away now and Dean made a reaction to move out of the way. Albert grabbed his hood firm to make him stay put and just like that the car came to a halt no further than 20 cm away. The window was right in front of the two as it opened to reveal a muscular man. The man had wore a leather jacket over his plain black shirt. He had no facial hair with a inch of hair mostly covered by his cap which said 'Driver' on the face.

As the approx 6 foot man stepped out of the other side of the vehicle, Albert and Dean approached the hood of the car. Without saying a word, the man also came to the front of the car. He nudged Albert and Dean back away from the car and opened the hood of the car. To their surprise the hood actually contained the boot of the car. What was in the boot was astounding and would be in both Dean and Albert minds forever.....