Feedback criteria draft TOK Exhibition
May 5, 2022•155 words
Required elements, formatting, cohesion
- prompt with number at top
- three images, clear/large
- objects are 'real-world' objects
- links to prompt are logical
- good balance
Quality of TOK analysis
- link to core or optional theme (optional)
- use of TOK concepts/terminology/jargon
- good justification for inclusion of each object
- discussion is about knowledge, not just a description of a the object or a debate
- interesting
Clarity & student voice
- clear, unpretentious, concise expression
- personal engagement through style
- balance/word length
Citation and use of evidence
- correct captioning of images and related Works Cited entries
- no unfounded claims - all claims evidenced using in-text citations and related Works Cited
- all entries in Works Cited are used at least once in the response
- plagiarism issues
- correct MLA citation
- no sweeping generalisations (about women, about the past, etc.)
Indication pass/fail: